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Michael J Pryce's avatar

Ok. Nice writing. Struck that she goes to therapy and brother can come rescue her… yet young enough to share a room? Good tension.

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Just so you know this novel has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Maybe they share a room more from solidarity than youth. :-)

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