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alex b.'s avatar

I got chills. This is good!

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Aw… thank you, Alex!! Hope you read the next chapter!

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Helen Rowlands's avatar

I love this! Keep going. Cannot wait for chapter two 😎

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Thanks, Helen! I might release one a day for the first week just to get you guys hooked. 🤣

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Keita Jane's avatar

Keep writing. You’re going somewhere really good.

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Just so you know - this series has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

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Michael J Pryce's avatar

Ok. Nice writing. Struck that she goes to therapy and brother can come rescue her… yet young enough to share a room? Good tension.

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Just so you know this novel has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Maybe they share a room more from solidarity than youth. :-)

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Fiona's avatar

Love this. So excited to read more.

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Thanks, Fiona!

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

I am looking forward to your feedback as I publish. Co-create with me :-)

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Just so you know - this series has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

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