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alex b.'s avatar

I got chills. This is good!

Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Aw… thank you, Alex!! Hope you read the next chapter!

Helen Rowlands's avatar

I love this! Keep going. Cannot wait for chapter two 😎

Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Thanks, Helen! I might release one a day for the first week just to get you guys hooked. 🤣

Keita Jane's avatar

Keep writing. You’re going somewhere really good.

Michael J Pryce's avatar

Ok. Nice writing. Struck that she goes to therapy and brother can come rescue her… yet young enough to share a room? Good tension.

Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

Maybe they share a room more from solidarity than youth. :-)

Fiona's avatar

Love this. So excited to read more.

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Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.'s avatar

I am looking forward to your feedback as I publish. Co-create with me :-)

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