Callie Wakes

[alex b.]

I got chills. This is good!

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Aw… thank you, Alex!! Hope you read the next chapter!

[Helen Rowlands]

I love this! Keep going. Cannot wait for chapter two 😎

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Thanks, Helen! I might release one a day for the first week just to get you guys hooked. 🤣

[Keita Jane]

Keep writing. You’re going somewhere really good.

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Just so you know - this series has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

[Michael J Pryce]

Ok. Nice writing. Struck that she goes to therapy and brother can come rescue her… yet young enough to share a room? Good tension.

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Just so you know this novel has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Maybe they share a room more from solidarity than youth. :-)

[John R. Brown]

I already love the claustrophobic and panic-inducing atmosphere. I could feel a lot of things going on.... Mentally, physically... The sensory depth. So good.

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

I am looking forward to your feedback as I publish. Co-create with me :-)

[John R. Brown]

I'm going to reread it before chapter two also… just to see if it hits the same way. 😊

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Just so you know - this series has moved to https://www.crappyfirstdraft.com

[John R. Brown]

Saw your post … just subscribed! 😁

[Fiona]

Love this. So excited to read more.

[Lisa-Marie Cabrelli, Ph.D.]

Thanks, Fiona!